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User Comments (5) | Isa |
No. I'm an octopus.
Age: 31 Karma: 686 Posts: 7833 Gender: Male Location: Uppsala, Sweden - GMT +1 pm | email
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I must say that this feels very...mixed. You introduce hearts before traps? Get it down in a chronological order - preferably by having another level in the background. Introduce the elements of the game in a logical fashion. I suggest that you make some kind of tutorial level specifically for this.
Also the initial text is too big, it makes it hard to see what's going on in the background. | | atomic7732 |
cute dars
Age: 26 Karma: 2 Posts: 46 Gender: Male pm | email
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The ending with the orange text and green colored background looks horrid. Maybe put a gray or black background. | | Harumbai |
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Age: 30 Karma: 260 Posts: 1743 Location: New Zealand pm | email
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Well this doesn't actually say much about the game and why people would want to play it. Possibly use more caves and cut between them showing different examples and credit them at the end rather than at the time. I think it should be longer to get more ideas across. The music could be a little more fitting and possibly more exciting. The writing would be condensed by saying thing like "Collect all the Treasure" while showing some treasure being collected and try and keep large amounts of writing to a minimum. There could be some more exciting caves too.
Upcoming HatPC level: Sanctuary, coming soon to an internet browser near you... | | Darvince |
sea level change
Age: 24 Karma: 107 Posts: 2043 Gender: Female Location: The Nuclear Era pm | email
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Lolwut, I presented this in its current state and got a 37/39.
"Time is a circuit, not a line; cybernetics instantiates templexity."
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~*~Soccer~*~
Karma: 450 Posts: 4466 Gender: Male Location: 1945 pm | email
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Where?
the cursor was kinda annoying too :/
i thought jumper was also not the best level for this either.
it had no traps aside from jumping from terrain to terrain.
'Livio' said: You know, I was thinking of getting an internship at Microsoft, but I'm not sure I want their lameness to rub off on me. | | |
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