Author: atvelonis Game: Minecraft Date: Sunday, April 14, 2013 - 7:04 pm
Description: My first Minecraft level! Actually, my first level at all. I'm pretty happy with it, what do you guys think? Here's a shot of it:
User Rating: (Log in to rate)8.1 out of 10 Great 6 votes |
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User Comments (8) | FlashMarsh |
Age: 24 Karma: 99 Posts: 2727 Gender: Male Location: UK pm | email
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7/10 Good I think the lime green wool didn't really fit in - It was too bright - Dark green wool or grass would have been a better choice. The path leading up to the sphere could have been a little more varied, and it doesn't look stable at all - When things don't look stable IMO they look worse normally. Good build. | | atvelonis |
Apocryphal Ruminator
Karma: 160 Posts: 1642 Gender: Male Location: An antique land pm | email
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Thanks for the feedback! But possibly, maybe a darker color may have looked better, I dunno.
jellsprout said: As a kid I always thought tennisballs looked delicious and I liked biting them. I still remember the feel of the fuzz on my teeth and tongue. | | kinectking |
Age: 23 Karma: 43 Posts: 505 Gender: Male pm | email
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8.5/10 Great I gotta go with flashmarsh, darker green would have looked nicer, but overall I liked it
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The Shepherd
Age: 22 Karma: 249 Posts: 4066 Gender: Male Location: My chair pm | email
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8.7/10 Great I disagree, I think that what mutts was going for was a colorful design. A darker green would be less noticed, making it look completely blue and boring. For a first level, it's great, especially considering it was handmade. I do think that the staircase could use some work, though. No railings, no support, just a clearly rushed, boring, stone staircase. | | Bmwsu |
Age: 27 Karma: 175 Posts: 2557 Gender: Male pm | email
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8.5/10 Great I disagree like Kro. I think that the lime is a nice touch, and it goes well with the other colors, yet it sticks out in a more-than-attractive way. I think that we can all agree that the main downside is the stairs. The inside (Yes, I've been there) is fun to jump around in aimlessly.
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sea level change
Age: 24 Karma: 107 Posts: 2043 Gender: Female Location: The Nuclear Era pm | email
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7.6/10 Good This was pretty good, but the stairs are absolutely dreadful. They'd either need to be made futuristic-looking or have supports and such.
"Time is a circuit, not a line; cybernetics instantiates templexity."
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Apocryphal Ruminator
Karma: 160 Posts: 1642 Gender: Male Location: An antique land pm | email
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FlashMarsh said: The path leading up to the sphere could have been a little more varied, and it doesn't look stable at all
krotomo said: I do think that the staircase could use some work, though. No railings, no support, just a clearly rushed, boring, stone staircase.
Bmwsu said: I think that we can all agree that the main downside is the stairs.
Darvince said: The stairs are absolutely dreadful. They'd either need to be made futuristic-looking or have supports and such.
mymop said: As I see it, the stairs are absolutely hideous.
I agree...The stairs do suck.
jellsprout said: As a kid I always thought tennisballs looked delicious and I liked biting them. I still remember the feel of the fuzz on my teeth and tongue. | | Mymop |
Your Friendly Neighborhood Mop
Age: 21 Karma: 39 Posts: 859 Gender: Male Location: New York pm | email
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8.5/10 Great As I see it, the stairs are absolutely hideous, and also there should be 4 stone brick slabs at the top. I went to it on InterServer and I liked the way the water looks like it's holding up the structure. Also, I like the interior and the bright green. Very vibrant.
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