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Author: atvelonis
Game: Minecraft
Date: Sunday, April 14, 2013 - 7:04 pm

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My first Minecraft level! Actually, my first level at all. I'm pretty happy with it, what do you guys think? Here's a shot of it:

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FlashMarsh
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Monday, April 15 2013, 8:49 am EST

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I think the lime green wool didn't really fit in - It was too bright - Dark green wool or grass would have been a better choice. The path leading up to the sphere could have been a little more varied, and it doesn't look stable at all - When things don't look stable IMO they look worse normally. Good build.
atvelonis
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Monday, April 15 2013, 5:23 pm EST
Apocryphal Ruminator

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Thanks for the feedback! But possibly, maybe a darker color may have looked better, I dunno.


jellsprout said:
As a kid I always thought tennisballs looked delicious and I liked biting them. I still remember the feel of the fuzz on my teeth and tongue.
kinectking
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Monday, April 15 2013, 5:26 pm EST

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I gotta go with flashmarsh, darker green would have looked nicer, but overall I liked it


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krotomo
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Monday, April 15 2013, 6:48 pm EST
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I disagree, I think that what mutts was going for was a colorful design. A darker green would be less noticed, making it look completely blue and boring. For a first level, it's great, especially considering it was handmade. I do think that the staircase could use some work, though. No railings, no support, just a clearly rushed, boring, stone staircase.
Bmwsu
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Tuesday, April 16 2013, 12:11 am EST

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I disagree like Kro.  I think that the lime is a nice touch, and it goes well with the other colors, yet it sticks out in a more-than-attractive way.  I think that we can all agree that the main downside is the stairs.  The inside (Yes, I've been there) is fun to jump around in aimlessly.


Darvince
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Tuesday, April 16 2013, 12:54 am EST
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This was pretty good, but the stairs are absolutely dreadful. They'd either need to be made futuristic-looking or have supports and such.


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atvelonis
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Tuesday, April 16 2013, 4:43 pm EST
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FlashMarsh said:
The path leading up to the sphere could have been a little more varied, and it doesn't look stable at all

krotomo said:
I do think that the staircase could use some work, though. No railings, no support, just a clearly rushed, boring, stone staircase.

Bmwsu said:
I think that we can all agree that the main downside is the stairs.

Darvince said:
The stairs are absolutely dreadful. They'd either need to be made futuristic-looking or have supports and such.

mymop said:
As I see it, the stairs are absolutely hideous.

I agree...The stairs do suck.


jellsprout said:
As a kid I always thought tennisballs looked delicious and I liked biting them. I still remember the feel of the fuzz on my teeth and tongue.
Mymop
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Wednesday, June 26 2013, 8:17 pm EST
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8.5/10
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4.3/5 — Hard
As I see it, the stairs are absolutely hideous, and also there should be 4 stone brick slabs at the top. I went to it on InterServer and I liked the way the water looks like it's holding up the structure. Also, I like the interior and the bright green. Very vibrant.


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