You have until 21 August to judge

At that date I will combine all the rankings into one average. If nobody has judged by then, I will judge this round myself and use those results.

Post your rankings for this round in this topic.

It is suggested that you not judge this round until it ends on august 7th

1) Rise of Hannah – Dekudude
2) Lonely Livio - Quirvy
3) The Heart of the Machine – Yuggy
4) Despite the Doom Suffix – Yaya
5) Lonely Timothy – GF4
6) It Which Must Not Be Named... In Vain – Shos

Judged on entertainment value, how well they were written, and how they incorporated the levels.

This was an interesting competition to sort through, lol. I thought it was odd that Dekudude went for a serious story, but it was written pretty well, and I liked the way he worked the levels into the narrative. Lonely Livio was funny (underwater entrance bit made me laugh). Yuggy’s story did a good job incorporating all of its levels.

Yaya’s story cranked the craziness up to 11, but that gave it some of its charm. Lonely Timothy was good but brief. Shos’ story started out fine, but it was even crazier than Yaya's and by the end I had no idea what was going on, lol.

1)Lon Liv
2)Ris
3)The
4)Lon Tim
5)Des
6)It W

I'll add comments on request

Remind me where these are written and I'll judge this pronto.

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I know these stories are long, but I do think you may reading these a bit too thoroughly, Isa.

Yeah.

Dekudude
Quirvy
Yuggy
Yaya
GF4
...
Shos

There.